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Discussion in 'Unrelated Discussion' started by RowanSkie, Feb 6, 2017.

  1. RowanSkie

    RowanSkie Member

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    Of course, you want to, you clicked the thread topic, heh.

    I'm a writer, and I want to show everybody this one-shot I made. It's a bit small, as I expected, but nonetheless, it'll show what I can do.

    All of the characters are mine.
    https://goo.gl/xGD1CU

    Luni's my fursona, Opal's one of my five personal OCs (which means whatever she does there, I do too sometimes), Jenna's my OC I'm using with a friend, and Skie's... well... long story, it includes another one-shot.
     
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  2. Ryeiu

    Ryeiu Active Member Team Amorous Supporter

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    "oi" is not a word I hear often love the word choice and story lease I got lost for second then read back over it and I like let me know if you make more.
     
  3. Ryeiu

    Ryeiu Active Member Team Amorous Supporter

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    Do I have permission to save it for future reading?
     
  4. BlackHusky

    BlackHusky Well-Known Member Dark Army Enthusiast

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    He posted it in here so I guess that's already a permission
     
  5. Ryeiu

    Ryeiu Active Member Team Amorous Supporter

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    I like to be sure
     
  6. RowanSkie

    RowanSkie Member

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    Yes. And you like my word choice? Huh.
     
  7. Ryeiu

    Ryeiu Active Member Team Amorous Supporter

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    Ja, I do
     
  8. TA_Hunter

    TA_Hunter Member

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    Not too shabby, In fact I'd like it. As Ryeiu said, the choice of words is kinda neat, I tend to give my story characters all sort of quirks and "special treatment" like an accent or a specific word they tend to use, kinda makes them more alive and relatable. Keep the work up mate, you're doing a fine job.
     
  9. RowanSkie

    RowanSkie Member

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    Oh, thanks! I wish my other works have the same response.
    (By other, I mean, My Little Pony fanfictions and that link in my signature.)
     
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    FurMaster DJ New Member

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  11. RowanSkie

    RowanSkie Member

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    Y
    You're a writer.

    I dare you to rewrite this, without the same characters, in your way!
     

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