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Discussion in 'Feedback and Wishlist' started by SapphireSmith9, Dec 13, 2016.

  1. SapphireSmith9

    SapphireSmith9 New Member

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    Hello,

    I really love the game, and felt a deep connection with skye in particular. And seth really got me emotional. And the non-genetic incest with coby was just plain hot. I enjoyed everything this game had to offer, but there was one thing that bothered me mildly. The grammar. I was able to understand exactly what was being said, but the wrong your/you're and then/than popped up quite frequently (as well as the occasional typo). It doesn't bother me that much, and doesn't impact the beautiful stories, but it certainly takes away from the professionalism. I would be more than happy to volunteer to run through every single line of dialogue to correct any misspellings, incorrect grammar, missing punctuation, and typos. And no, I'm not asking for money or credit, just willing to help out.

    Keep up the great work guys,

    - Sapphire Smith the Dragon
     
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  2. Jenie

    Jenie Member

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    I noticed this as well.
    I would be reading and i would stop and go "don't they mean..."
    I found myself going "that's not spelled right" every now and then.
     
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