So, I'm going through the game, and am noticing a few odd choices that are nagging at me. They're rather minor, and definitely nothing that requires immediate attention. 1. In the Dustin dates, the player goes to see a black and white movie, but what's on the screen is clearly in colour. 2. There's a few characters that appear in more than one date path e.g. Dustin's ex also appears in Jax's path. However, there's no connection, other than name and looks. It's a bit jarring interacting with a character that you've clearly met in a different path, but that character doesn't recognise you at all. They're very minor issues, but they're somewhat distracting. Oh, and the typos as well. However, I think that would be best sorted, if you just pull all the text out (not sure how easy that is) and just ask somebody to proofread all of it in one go.